Our First Attempt.

This was our first film,we edited everything of this film and then showed it to our peers. After showing it to them, they gave us their feedback and most of them said that the narrative and lighting was the main points that didn't work out for them. So then we planned to changed our narrative and have better lighting at our location, so we decided to re-film our whole project. Looking at this piece and our final piece, you will see a huge difference as it makes much more sense and is clearer to watch.



This was our first film,we edited everything of this film and then showed it to our peers.Our final piece is a big improvement from this! After showing it to them, they gave us their feedback and most of them said that the flow of the lighting, as we could have made it look more intense. We researched into a few horror movies, and were inspired by their techniques such as their use of lighting and sound. We also changed our narrative, to create more narrative enigmas and make it more scary as we wanted to put the audience in a more vulnerable position by creating suspense.
We think we achieved this as a few of our scenes related to the horror films we had researched.
We tried to upload this film clip straight on to our blog, but due some technical problem we couldn't. So as a alternative, we uploaded the video on to YouTube and then added the link to our blog.